This is the feedback that we had received from our pitch. We received similar feedback:
- Audience needs to be more clear
- Explain thoroughly the concept, even though we understood it, the class did not
-Risk assessment should have been spoken about more
However, things that went well were:
-Very detailed
-Linked it with other music videos
-Showed where we got our influences from
-Thought out well
From looking back at our feedback, we decided to buy our smoke bombs instead of making them as it may cause a lot more harm than we initially thought.
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